高三年級(jí)州統(tǒng)測(cè)作文閱卷總結(jié)與思考

高三年級(jí)全州統(tǒng)測(cè)作文閱卷總結(jié)與思考

（黔東南州201*年普通高考模擬考試試卷作文題）

一、閱讀下面的材料，根據(jù)要求寫(xiě)一篇不少于800字的文章。

她沒(méi)有上過(guò)大學(xué)，也不知道什么是“院士”。她一生只學(xué)會(huì)寫(xiě)5個(gè)字，卻被香港大學(xué)授予“榮譽(yù)院士”。她沒(méi)做什么驚天動(dòng)地的偉業(yè)，只是44年如一日地為學(xué)生做飯、掃地。從29歲到73歲，在香港大學(xué)的大學(xué)堂宿舍先后擔(dān)任助理廚師和宿舍服務(wù)員等職。有關(guān)三嫂種種瑣碎的“好”，事隔若干年仍然潛伏在歷屆學(xué)生們的記憶中。三嫂卻說(shuō)不清自己究竟“好在哪里”。在她看來(lái)，“拎出個(gè)心來(lái)對(duì)人”，人生其實(shí)就這么簡(jiǎn)單。在頒獎(jiǎng)臺(tái)上，她被安排壓軸出場(chǎng)。這位82歲的普通老太太被稱贊“對(duì)高等教育界作出獨(dú)特的貢獻(xiàn)，以自己的生命影響大學(xué)堂仔的生命”，是“香港大學(xué)之寶”。

要求選擇一個(gè)角度構(gòu)思作文，自主確定立意，確定文體；不脫離材料內(nèi)容和含意的范圍作文，不要套作，不得抄襲。二、參加全州高考模擬閱卷收集到的作文好標(biāo)題

1、平凡與堅(jiān)持2、學(xué)會(huì)平凡，才能偉大3、執(zhí)著于平凡才是最高學(xué)位4、平凡的崗位，輝煌的人生5、平凡，讓生命開(kāi)出真誠(chéng)之花

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29、是金子總會(huì)發(fā)光30、讓平凡的花釀造偉大的蜜31、人生因奉獻(xiàn)而精彩32、生命因平凡而精彩33、平凡禮贊6、偉大來(lái)自平凡7、平凡中也有美味8、因平凡而美麗9、平凡鑄就成功10、用心今天，喝彩明天11、為默默的奉獻(xiàn)而鼓掌12、綻放心靈之花13、世界因平凡而精彩

14、當(dāng)“平凡”遇上了“堅(jiān)守”15、真心成就偉業(yè)16、平平淡淡才是真17、生命的意義在于奉獻(xiàn)18、今天我讀懂了“平凡”19、平凡彰顯人性的美麗20、平凡是一種偉大的情操21、平凡也能結(jié)出偉大22、平凡的美麗23、平淡自己，輝煌人生24、盛開(kāi)平凡的生命之花25、平凡中顯盡光華26、細(xì)雨無(wú)聲最潤(rùn)物27、平凡也能綻放精彩28、讓平凡的愛(ài)心飄揚(yáng)起來(lái)

34、榮譽(yù)是從平凡中走出來(lái)的35、真誠(chéng)的力量36、人生與奉獻(xiàn)37、平凡中的偉大38、有一種成功叫平凡39、榮譽(yù)是這樣煉成的40、不經(jīng)意的美麗41、偉大常積于平凡

42、為他人開(kāi)一朵平凡花43、平凡路上的美麗44、堅(jiān)守平凡45、與平凡干杯46、與平凡同行47、感悟平凡48、平凡中的感動(dòng)49、拎出個(gè)心來(lái)待人50、把平凡和簡(jiǎn)單握在手中51、捕捉每一個(gè)平凡的瞬間52、為平凡喝彩

53、讓平凡開(kāi)出精彩的花朵54、在平凡中閃光55、平凡與偉大的兩岸

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三、閱卷后得到的幾點(diǎn)如何應(yīng)對(duì)高考作文的體會(huì)。

1、“題好一半文”真不假：①能緊扣材料擬出個(gè)好標(biāo)題的作文一般都寫(xiě)得不差；②好標(biāo)題因搶眼，給評(píng)卷老師第一個(gè)好印象，得分一般也不低。

2、借助修辭擬的標(biāo)題一般都是好標(biāo)題，可以這樣說(shuō)標(biāo)題因修辭而精彩。如：比喻、擬人：《讓平凡開(kāi)出精彩的花朵》、《讓平凡之花釀造偉大的蜜》，對(duì)比、對(duì)偶：《平凡的崗位，輝煌的人生》、《用心今天，喝彩明天》。

3、要善于捕捉體現(xiàn)材料中心內(nèi)容或含意的中心詞詞，并將其含于標(biāo)題中，如：《平凡的美麗》、《平凡中盡顯光華》、．．．．《在平凡中閃光》、《平凡禮贊》。．．．．

4、文章扣不扣材料，是不是依材料而寫(xiě)，主要看文章的首尾。所以文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾的議論一定要緊扣材料內(nèi)容，而尤其又是結(jié)尾�？梢赃@樣說(shuō)，文章結(jié)尾的一兩句點(diǎn)明標(biāo)題、扣住材料的議論，可以使一篇偏題或離題之作，起死回生。

5、標(biāo)題與正文之間一定要間隔一行：①規(guī)范而美觀；②空出的這一行也可算字?jǐn)?shù)，因?yàn)樽悴蛔阕謹(jǐn)?shù)只看結(jié)尾到不到“800”字處。

6、考試時(shí)的書(shū)寫(xiě)筆，應(yīng)選用“0.5”的碳素筆芯，最好是原裝的筆芯，切忌用藍(lán)色筆芯。

7、能寫(xiě)一手好字是高考作文一筆財(cái)富。兩篇同樣內(nèi)容的作文，如果其中一篇書(shū)寫(xiě)整潔，字體滿格，無(wú)涂改，卷面清晰，這篇文章一般要多得3分左右，如果再加上寫(xiě)得一手

漂亮的字，一般要多得5分左右。

8、即使時(shí)間不夠，寫(xiě)了700多字，寫(xiě)不滿800字，也要寫(xiě)一段緊扣材料的結(jié)尾，這樣也可算是一篇完整的文章。文章字?jǐn)?shù)以850左右為宜，一般不宜超過(guò)字?jǐn)?shù)太多。

9、語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美是文章得分的最主要途徑之一。兩篇同樣內(nèi)容的文章，如果其中一篇語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美，那么這篇文章至少要多給4-5分。

10、高考作文最忌無(wú)段、長(zhǎng)段和三段論的文章，段落一般以5-6段為宜，也才顯層次分明。

高考作文要想獲得高分，應(yīng)做到以下“十”要求：

一、擬題：角度宜小，適于表達(dá)二、開(kāi)頭：開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，直接點(diǎn)題三、中間：兩個(gè)素材，敘中有議四、結(jié)尾：精心打造，點(diǎn)明材料五、段落：五至六段，層次分明六、標(biāo)點(diǎn)：使用正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范七、字體：行楷字體，快而易辨八、字?jǐn)?shù)：850為宜，超多費(fèi)時(shí)九、文面：目清眉秀，無(wú)青春痘十、寫(xiě)時(shí)：50分太緊，60分為佳

龍耀貴201*年4月20日

擴(kuò)展閱讀：高三作文總結(jié)

夾敘夾議

201*年上海卷（春季）

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositioninabout100-120words,accordingtotheinstructionsgiveninChinese.國(guó)際青年藝術(shù)節(jié)（theInternationalYouthArtFestival）即將舉行。作為一名志愿者，談?wù)勀愕拇蛩�。范文�?/p>

TheInternationalYouthArtFestivalwillbeheldinsomedays.Asavolunteer,Iwilltrymybesttoprovidequalifiedservice.Atfirst,duringthesedays,IwilltrytoimprovemyspokenEnglishsothatIcantalkwithforeignersfluentlyandgetmyideasacross.Second,IwilllearnsomethingfromtheparticipantsofIYAFandcultivatemyinterestinChineseaswellasforeignarts.Third,IwilltakethischancetointroducemoreaboutChineseculturetooutforeignfriends.IftheyareamazedatthegreatchangesofShanghai,Iwillshowthemaroundoutbeautifycity.Inaward,IamproudofworkingasavolunteerintheIYAF.Iwillbenefitfromsuchworkingexperienceinbothlanguagelearningandcharacterdevelopment.201*年上海卷（秋季）

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.古人云：“天生我才必有用”（Theremustbeauseformytalent），通過(guò)描述你生活中的一件事，說(shuō)明人各有所長(zhǎng)，無(wú)論才能大小都能成為有用的人。范文：ThereisanoldChinesesayingthattheremustbeauseformytalent.Ihaveregardedthisasmymottoformanyyears.Frommypointofview,everybodyisgoodforsomething.Withsomeusefultalent,youwillmakeyourcontributionstosociety.WhenIwastenyearsold,therewasanoldmanlivingatthecornerofPingyuanRoad.Hedidn’thavetheopportunitytostudyinschool,buthelearnedhowtomakewoodenfurniture.Everytimepeoplewenttoaskhimtomendtheirfurniture,hewaswillingtohelpthem.Inhissparetime,hewouldmaketoyswithsmallpiecesofwood.Someofthemweresoldtothetoystoreandtheothersweregiventous.WheneverIseethelovelytoysmadebythisoldman,Iremembermyhappychildhood.Fromthisoldman,wecanseewhatevertalentyouhave,youcanfindyourownwayofusingit.Themostimportantfactorisyourconfidence.Ifyoubelievethattheremustbeauseforyourtalent,youwillfindit.

議論文

201*年上海卷（秋季）

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositioninover120words,accordingtothetopicgiveninChinese.請(qǐng)你談?wù)勣I車大量進(jìn)入家庭后，對(duì)家庭、環(huán)境和經(jīng)濟(jì)可能產(chǎn)生的影響。范文：

Withmoreandmorecarsbecomingpopularmeansoftransportationformanyfamiliesinour

society,ourlifestyleischanginggreatly.Automobileshaveseveraladvantages.Aboveall,itofferspeoplefreedomtogowheretheywanttogo.Besides,travelingtoworkbycarismorecomfortable,fortheydon’thavetowastetheirtimewaitingforbusesorundergroundtrains.Inaddition,muchoftheworld’seconomyisbuiltonproducingautomobilesandsupplyingroads,services,andrepairsforthosevehicles.Inspiteoftheiradvantages,automobileshavemanyharmfuleffectsonhumanlives.Carsoftenproduceairpollutionandfillthecitieswithunbearablenoise.Moreover,carsarethemajorcauseofroadaccidents.ToownaprivatecarinChinatodaywillbringyounotonlyfinancialburdenbutalsoothertroublessuchaskeepingthemachineingoodrepair,findingaparkingplaceatnight.Inmyopinion,carisanecessaryevilinthemodernsociety.Whenweuseit,wecannotignoretheproblemsithasbroughtabout.

201*年上海英語(yǔ)高考預(yù)測(cè)作文范文（三）

政府召集有關(guān)專家開(kāi)會(huì)商討如何解決交通擁堵，大家各抒己見(jiàn)：一、私家車增多，應(yīng)提高稅收，控制數(shù)量。二、路況惡劣，應(yīng)擴(kuò)建道路。三、人車混行，應(yīng)分道行駛。

Forthesake/purposeofsolvingthetrafficproblemthelocalgovernmentheldameetingrecentlyatwhichmanyexpertshadafulldiscussionandputforwardvaluablesuggestions.

Firsttheypointedoutthatthecauseofserioustrafficjamwasduetotheincreasingnumberofprivatecars.Theyheld/maintainedthatraisingthetaxratesofusingcarswasoneofthemosteffectivemeasurestolimitthistrendandpeopleshouldbeencouragedtomakefulluseofpublictransportation.

Thesecondleading/contributingfactorthatthegovernmentcouldn’tneglectwasthepoorroadconditions.Narrowstreetsinadequatetrafficsignsandfalsesignallightsaddedtothetrouble.Itwassuggestedthatoldhousesshouldbepulleddowntomakewayforthetraffic.

What’smoreeverydaywecouldheartheendlessrunningvehiclesroaringthroughthenarrowstreetsfilledwithanxiouspassingcrowds.Newregulationsshouldbepracticallyadoptedtoseparatethemforthesakeofsafety.

Alltheexpertspresentagreedthatstepsshouldbeimmediatelytakentosolvetheproblemeffectively.

201*年上海英語(yǔ)高考預(yù)測(cè)作文范文（二）

有些重點(diǎn)中學(xué)為了在自主招生或直推中以示公正，往往會(huì)公布學(xué)生的成績(jī)或排名，請(qǐng)就此現(xiàn)象談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

Withtheadoptionofthequality-educationpolicymanyadvancedteachingmethodshavebeenintroducedtoChinaMeanwhilemanymiddleschoolsstillfindagoodwaytopublicizetoscoresandrankstointroducegoodcandidatestokeyuniversitiesfairly.

Competitionispartofourmodernlife.IfIknowtheexactpositionwhereIamIwillsparenoefforttocatchupwithothers.Besideswewillfacethepressurethatmakingscorespublicizedappliestous.WeSeniorThreestudentshavenochoicebuttoadaptourselvestoallthepressurewhichhelpsusdevelopourfullpersonality.

Thoughnooneistoblameexceptmyselfiftheranksaremadeknowntestscoresareprivate.Inmanyexperts’eyesindividualstudentshouldhavehisownrightofprivacy.

It’stimeforeducationauthoritytocreateabetterenvironmenttopromotequality-educationwhereeverystudentcanreallyimprovehimself.圖表作文

201*年高考英語(yǔ)作文

下表提供了你心儀的兩所大學(xué)的招生信息。通過(guò)比較做出選擇，并結(jié)合個(gè)人情況說(shuō)明理由。范文A

Ofthetwouniversitieslistedabove,Iprefertheoneinthenorth.Themainreasonisthatthe

tuitionisonly5,000RMBfortheuniversityayear,comparedwith8,000RMBfortheuniversityinthesouth.Thismakesabigdiferenceforafamilylikeamine,becausemyfatherispeasantandtheonlybreadwinnerinthefamily.Studyingatthenorthernuniversitycansavemyfatherbigmoney.AnotherreasonItakeintoconsiderationisthepreferencepolicythenorthernuniversityoffers.Anycandidatewochoosestostudytheremaygainanextra20points,whichgreatlyraisesthepossibilityofmybeingadmittedtothisuniversity.Ofcourse,itdoesn"tmeanthatitwillbequiteeasytopasstheentranceexambecausethisuniversityhaslimitedthenumberofqualifiedcandidatesto10only.However,Ihavebeendoingquitewellinschool,soIbelieveIcanpasstheentranceexamwithflyingcolors.范文B

Comparedwiththenorthernuniversity,thesouthernoneismoretomyliking.Itistruethatintermsoftuitiontheformeris3,000RMBcheaperthanthelatter.However,that"snotaproblemtomebecauseIcanworkmywaythroughcollegeonceIgetadmitted.Whatcountsisthereputationithas.OnceIenterthisschool,myfuturecareerisguaranteed.

Also,theuniversityinthesouthrecruits20newsstudentsinsteadof10,whichmeansthatIwillstandabetterchanceofgettingadmitted.Thecompetitionisverykeen,though,asyoucanseebecausethisuniversitydoesn"tgivecandidatesanyextrapoints.SoallIcandonowisstudyhard,passthetoughentranceexam,andqualifyasastudentoftheuniversityofmychoice.

201*（上海）GuidedWriting

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositioninover120wordsbasedonthepictureandtheinstructionsgivenbelow.

簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片內(nèi)容，結(jié)合生活實(shí)際，就圖片的主題談?wù)勛约旱母邢搿?/p>

Formanychildren,learningtorideabicyclecanbeaninterestingexperience,butthisisnotthecasewiththegirlinthepicture,whoobviouslyhasnofunatall.Forfearthatshemayfalloffthebike,herparentsareholdingthehandles,withhergrandmothergivingahardpushfrombehind.Thethreeadultsaredrippingwithsweatwhilethegirlissittingonthesaddlewonderingwhoactuallyislearningtocycle.Withoutdoubttheyhavegonetoofarprotectingthegirl.

Today"sparentsseemtobetooprotectiveoftheirchildren,whichcanbeabarriertotheirgrowthanddevelopment.Instead,childrenshouldbeencouragedtolearntodothingsontheirown.Ofcourse,theyarelikelytorunintosetbacks,butitisthesesetbacksthatcanteachthemtobematureandindependent.Don"tyouthinkso?

假如你是李華，在最近的研究性學(xué)習(xí)當(dāng)中，受《21世紀(jì)中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)》（The21stCentury）之邀，你對(duì)你所在的班60名同學(xué)（男女各半）進(jìn)行了上網(wǎng)目的的調(diào)查�，F(xiàn)將調(diào)查結(jié)果（如下表所示）用英語(yǔ)給報(bào)社的編輯寫(xiě)一封信，報(bào)道此事，以引起輿論的關(guān)注，并提出你的觀點(diǎn)和建議。

40%35%30%25%20%15%10%5%0%readnewssende-mailschatstudyplaygamesboysgirls

注意：1、報(bào)道應(yīng)包括圖表所示全部?jī)?nèi)容，可適度發(fā)揮。2、文章的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3、詞數(shù)：150

4、參考詞匯：調(diào)查：makeasurvey

Deareditor，

Ihaverecentlymadeasurveyamong30boysand30girlsinmyclassabouttheirpurposeofgettingontheInternet.______________________________________________

范文：Deareditor,Ihaverecentlymadeasurveyamong30boysand30girlsinmyclassabouttheirpurposeofgettingontheInternet.

Thegirls’favoriteischatting,butfewboyslikeit.Whattheboysliketodomostisplayinggamesandthegirlsalsolikeit.Bothboysandgirlsliketoreadnewsorsende-mailsontheInternet.Maybetheythinkit’sthemostconvenientwaytogetinformationfromkeepingintouchwithfriends.Asforstudying,thenumbersofboysandgirlsareequal,butaltogetheronlyseveralofthemwillusetheInternetasatooltostudy.

Inmyopinion,usefulastheInternetis,thestudentshadbettermakebetterandwiseuseofit.Otherwise,it’simpossibleforustobenefitfromit.Moreover,IalsohopetheparentswillpayenoughattentiontotheirchildrenusingtheInternetintheirsparetime.

Yours，LiHua下列表格為某市1996年與201*年人們度假方式的情況比較，請(qǐng)按表格內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的短文，并對(duì)度假方式變化原因加以簡(jiǎn)要評(píng)析。

年度境外旅游海邊度假爬山野營(yíng)199611%38%11%201*22%31%34%原因收入增加海水污染回歸自然Thewaypeoplespendtheirholidayschangedalotfrom1996to201*.

[思路點(diǎn)撥]

１．題材：書(shū)信；說(shuō)明+議論２．時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)３．人稱：第三人稱４．要點(diǎn)提示：（１）上網(wǎng)的目的；（２）讀新聞；（３）發(fā)送郵件；（４）聊天；（５）

學(xué)習(xí)；（６）玩游戲；（７）評(píng)語(yǔ)５．篇章結(jié)構(gòu)：文章可分兩段

下列表格為某市1996年與201*年人們度假方式的情況比較，請(qǐng)按表格內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的短文，并對(duì)度假方式變化原因加以簡(jiǎn)要評(píng)析。

年度境外旅游海邊度假爬山野營(yíng)199611%38%11%201*22%31%34%原因收入增加海水污染回歸自然Thewaypeoplespendtheirholidayschangedalotfrom1996to201*.

[思路點(diǎn)撥]

６．題材：書(shū)信；說(shuō)明+議論７．時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)８．人稱：第三人稱９．要點(diǎn)提示：（１）上網(wǎng)的目的；（２）讀新聞；（３）發(fā)送郵件；（４）聊天；（５）

學(xué)習(xí)；（６）玩游戲；（７）評(píng)語(yǔ)１０．篇章結(jié)構(gòu)：文章可分兩段

思路點(diǎn)撥：

1、體裁：比較對(duì)照類

2、時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)（發(fā)表評(píng)論時(shí)可用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）3、人稱：第三人稱

4、篇章結(jié)構(gòu)：分三段范文：

Thewaypeoplespendtheirholidayschangedalotfrom1996to201*.Thetableshowsthatagreaternumberofpeoplespenttheirholidaystravelingabroadin201*.Therateof201*(22%)doubledthatof1996(11%).Wearesurethatthenumberwillincreasebecausewiththeirincomesrising,morepeoplecanaffordthejourneysabroad.

Atthesametime,theseasideattractedalotofpeople.However,therateslightlydroppedfrom38%in1996to31%in201*,thereasonforwhichliesinthefactthatseawaterisbeingpolluted.Thepollutedseasideislikelytodrivemorevisitorsaway.

Theyear201*sawasharpincreaseinthenumberofpeoplewhowentclimbingandcamping.Theratein201*(34%)wasmorethanthreetimesthatin1996(11%).Thereasonisthatmoreandmorepeopleareeagertogetclosetonature.

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90后出生的學(xué)生行為和價(jià)值觀令人擔(dān)憂。假如你是90后的一位學(xué)生，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的信息以“Dotrustus----agenerationbornin90s”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，以消除人們的憂慮。190后的境遇面臨更多的升學(xué)和就業(yè)煩惱，所處的環(huán)境競(jìng)爭(zhēng)更激烈。2人們的憂慮注重自我，輕視合作....缺乏毅力，容易氣餒......盲目追求，渴望成名......3我們的長(zhǎng)處敢于挑戰(zhàn)......（請(qǐng)考生聯(lián)系自己，再列舉兩至三點(diǎn)）注意；字?jǐn)?shù)150，開(kāi)頭句和結(jié)束句已為你寫(xiě)好，文章中不能出現(xiàn)自己和自己所在學(xué)校的名字。參考范文

Goodafternoon,everyone!

Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis"Dotrustus----agenerationbornin90s".

Livinginanenvironmentfulloffiercercompetition,we,agenerationbornin90s,arefacedwithmoreproblemsinenteringhigherschoolsandgettingemployed.Underthesecircumstances,wearedevelopingourspecialmannersandvalues,whichhasraisedpeople"sconcern.

Theyworrywecaretoomuchaboutourselvesandareunwillingtocooperatewithothers,makingithardforustoachievesuccessinwhateverwedo.Besides,intheireyes,welackdetermination,andthisiswhatittakestodoanyjobwell.Withoutit,wemayeasilygiveupintimeofdifficulty.Theyarealsoconcernedthatwearesoeagertowininstantfamethatwefollowfashionblindly,whichwillinturnruinourvaluesandfuture.

However,we,agenerationbornin90s,haveourownadvantagesdespitesomeweaknesses.Firstly,wehavethecouragetomeetchallengesandtakerisks,whichhelpsrealizeourdreams.Inaddition,wearequick-mindedandcreative.Wecandoourworkmoreefficiently.Yet,westillneedtolearnmorefromthoseexperienced.Pleasedotrustus.

Thankyouforyourlistening.201*年上海卷（秋季）

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositioninover120wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.老師要求你負(fù)責(zé)墻報(bào)（wallpaper）工作并征求你的意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)你在日記中表達(dá)你的決定并談?wù)勏敕ā７段模?/p>

March5,FridayCloudyToday,theclassteacheraskedmetoberesponsibleforthewallnewspaper,whichwillbefinishednextFriday.Iamwillingtotakeupthishardworkandputmyheartandsoulintoit.Ithinkthisistheidealopportunityformetoshowmyabilities.IhavegreatconfidencethatIwilldoitwell.Inordertoworksteadily,Ineedtwoclassmateswhocanhelpmetofinishit.Ofthetwo,onewillberesponsiblefordrawingwhiletheotheriswillberesponsibleforwriting.Secondly,Iplantousethetitle“TheCollegeEntranceExamandFurther”.Iintendtodivideitintothreeparts:relaxation,hardworkandsuccess.Thirdly,itisnecessarytoexaminetheworkbytheteacherandforustosparesometimetoimproveit.Withthehelpoftheothertwoclassmates,Ibelieveourwallnewspaperwillobtainthehighestpraise.Ihopeourteacherwilltrustandinstructusindetailsandthatweareabletohandinperfectworkbeforethedeadline.

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositioninover120wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.你的好友因家境一般買(mǎi)不起名牌而悶悶不樂(lè)，給他寫(xiě)封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。

收信人：徐海青寄信人：黃平（不可用自己的真實(shí)姓名）寫(xiě)信日期：201*年6月8日范文：

June8,201*DearHaiqing,It’ssogoodtohearfromyouagain.I’mfineandIenjoymyworkverymuch.IcanseewhatupsetsyouatthemomentbutIdon’tthinkyoushouldfeellikethat.Appearancenevertellsthetruth.Famousbrandsdon’tmakefamousorsuccessfulpeople.Itisaperson’scharacterandabilitythatreallycount.Althoughone’schoiceofclothingtellssomewhataboutone’spersonalinterestandtaste,itisone’saccomplishmentinself-cultivationthatmakesthedifferencebutnotnecessarilythebrandofhisclothingorthemakeofhiscarorbikehe’sriding.Togetpossessionofsomefamousbrandsmighthelpyoubecomeacenterofattentiontemporarily,butitcan’twinyouever-lastingrespectfromothersifyoufailtoproveyourselfawell-educatedperson.Let’smakefulluseofourtimeatschooltolearnmoreandtryoutbesttobecomeusefultothesociety.ThisiswhatI’dliketosharewithyou.Bytheway,what’syourplanforthecomingvacation?WouldyoufancyatriptosomewhereoutsideShanghai?Ifso,wecanplanonetogether.Yours,

HuangPing201*年上海英語(yǔ)高考預(yù)測(cè)作文范文（一）由于你的父母執(zhí)意希望你報(bào)考本地名校，請(qǐng)以化名王小二的名義寫(xiě)一封信說(shuō)服父母同意你報(bào)考清華大學(xué)Jan1st201*Dearparents

Iknowit’sabithard/difficultforyoutoacceptmychoicetoapplytoTsinghuaUniversity(forfurtherstudy).Youhavebeentakinggoodcareofmeduringthepast18yearsandinyoureyesI’magoodboywhoisalwayswillingtofollowyouradvice.ButthistimeIdohopethatyoucanallowmetomakemyowndecision.TsinghuaUniversityoneofthetopuniversitiesworldwidehasappealedtonumerousexcellentapplicants.Notonlydotheyadmirethesedistinguishedscholarsbutalsotheycansharetheadvancedteachingfacilitiesandreferenceresources.InadditiongraduatesfromTsinghuaareboundtohavemorechancestofindrewardingjobs.InthiscompetitivesocietyIcanprovemyselfanoutstandingtalentandmakegreatcontributionstothedevelopmentofournation.

IknowyouareworriedthatIcan’tlookaftermyselfifIgotoTsinghua.Howeverthiswillenablemetolearnhowtoliveindependentlyandstandonmyownfeet.Ireallyhopeyoucanunderstandmeandsupportmydecisionwhichwillbenefitmyfuture.

Yours

XiaoErWang作文題目：在某些地區(qū)塑料袋的禁止使用并不是很成功，因此白色污染仍然繼續(xù)給當(dāng)?shù)貓?bào)紙的編輯寫(xiě)一封信，信內(nèi)包括1給出自己簡(jiǎn)短的看法和觀點(diǎn)2給出2-3條建議DearEditor，

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Iknowthattherearemanylocalresidentsinfavouroftheusageofplasticbagssothatmanybusinesseswouldstillattracttheirregularcustomersbyusingthem.However,inordertocopewiththeworseningproblem,mysuggestionisthatasubstituteofplasticbagsshallbemadeandacceptedbythecustomers.Inaddition,localauthoritiesaresupposedtomakerelativelawsagainstsuchbehavior.

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsseriously.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

YoursSincerely,

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